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I will admit I like the war snippet- especially with Qibli’s spell.

He needs to stfu about Moon still tho

Blarghhh all the moon stuff kills it every time.

Also the forced interaction with Foeslayer???? Like what the fuck was that. Tsunami was totally irrelevant to the plot, this was so crammed and half assed as a story beat.

Also Winter’s crash out is SOOOOO warranted. Everyone acts like he THREW the pot down, but it was an accidental bump. Like bruh be so fucking fr.

I LOVE THE FIRST ACT OF THE BOOK SO MUCH! Aside from the forced romance stuff…it gets good when Qibli isn’t Moon Moon Moon or when Thorn likes Smolder for some reason.
Qibli CAN be such a fun character when he’s left to his own devices.
Also Thorn hehehehe I love the Outclaws sm.

I love the Scorpion Den stuff sm

I am just really not having fun with this one man idk

Tui please stop the romance please Thorn does NAWT Need a mate please

Otherwise, hehe yayyyy Thorn hehehe