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Ummm... the beginning of this is farfetched. Sex with her captor within the first 24hrs? Immediate acceptance of her luck with being kidnapped? hmm... not realistic.
pg53, this doesn't make sense: "...allowing it out of the cage where it dwelt when his id was in control." "id"????? What the hell is that? a typo? Not a good start. And the basic descriptions are already pushing it.
— Jun 25, 2017 10:10AM
pg53, this doesn't make sense: "...allowing it out of the cage where it dwelt when his id was in control." "id"????? What the hell is that? a typo? Not a good start. And the basic descriptions are already pushing it.
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S. Rutherford
is on page 118 of 203
This writer needs to be slapped with a fucking dictionary. First John calls Grant a cougar. Then Sherrie considers Grant a mountain lion. Grant considers himself a panther. ALL OF THOSE ANIMALS ARE DIFFERENT FROM ONE ANOTHER!
And there is no way in hell an abductee will fuck her captor within 24hrs, anther man a day later, and both soon after that. Even Stockholm doesn't happen that fast!
This writer needs help.
— Jun 25, 2017 11:44PM
And there is no way in hell an abductee will fuck her captor within 24hrs, anther man a day later, and both soon after that. Even Stockholm doesn't happen that fast!
This writer needs help.