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Thatcher's POV voice does not sound distinct enough from Thais's. If I don't pay attention to the chapter title I miss that it's his POV and then it's confusing because the narrative voice sounds like it fits with Thais's except for the fact that they are usually in different places from each other.

Found a few more typos

I've counted at least four glaring grammatical typos in the past maybe 50 pages.