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is 55% done
I've counted at least four glaring grammatical typos in the past maybe 50 pages.
— Nov 01, 2026 06:34PM
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Jules
is 74% done
Thatcher's POV voice does not sound distinct enough from Thais's. If I don't pay attention to the chapter title I miss that it's his POV and then it's confusing because the narrative voice sounds like it fits with Thais's except for the fact that they are usually in different places from each other.
— Nov 02, 2026 08:33AM