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Bro. HOW THE FUCK DID SHE NOT KNOW SHE WAS MARRIED???? DID SHE NOT CHANGE HER NAME??? if she didn’t, fine. BUT IF SHE DID, SHE HAS TO SHOW PROOF OF MARRIAGE LICENSE ????

The further we get into this, the more I struggle with the characters. The mom is said not to give the cold shoulder, yet she hasn’t been a warm mother this whole time. In fact, I struggle with her characterization as a whole. It doesn’t make sense for a single mom who has Struggled, not show much affection for her son. It’s disappointing. Maybe it was done so the affair doesn’t hit as bad.

Okay boys we are at an emotional pinch point, but it doesn’t land. You see. When Zeke is addressed that his soft spot person wants to see him silly and fun and IN LOVE, we as the reader need to be like shiiiit we saw that with homie Elias. Except we didn’t. Zeke has never been “fun” maybe chill…And how the little time Zekes sister spent on page observing this is disbelieving that she would pick up on that.

If you think about it, Zeke is raw dogging his stepson after a condom bursts in his stepson. Furthermore, Zeke is raw dogging his stepson in his booty with the same dick that goes in his wife's cooter, aka stepson's mommy. This is crazy and I'm living for it. I need Jesus.

NGL I love how unhinged Zeke is. Man is GONE for Elais, and I, the immoral monster, am eating this shit upppp

Ayyyy North Carolina summer heat rep