sabrinareads’s Reviews > Gypsy Moon > Status Update

Decided to check how often 'grin' or 'grinning' pops up. Grin shows up 49 times and grinning 8 times for a total of 58. That is ridiculous.

UH-OH my first real critique!!! During this re-read I'm really noticing how often someone's grin is "growing" or "spreading". I'm talking like every other page. It's cute to picture but oh lord does Kristy repeat herself!!!!!!!!

"After a long stretch of silence, I start feeling more and more ridiculous, wearing a beautiful new red coat and matching boots with Vance’s T-shirt, while sitting in the lap of the Morpheous, next to the werewolf in the snow, as the Van Helsing and vampire stare on." 🩷🩷🩷