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Chapter 1
Still getting used to the third-person limited narration. I usually prefer being inside a character’s head rather than watching them from the outside. Also noticed there’s more narration and description than dialogue. Curious to see if I’ll get more comfortable with the writing style as I continue.
— Oct 31, 2026 01:24AM
Still getting used to the third-person limited narration. I usually prefer being inside a character’s head rather than watching them from the outside. Also noticed there’s more narration and description than dialogue. Curious to see if I’ll get more comfortable with the writing style as I continue.
