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omg 😭 the nickname 😭

screaming giggling kicking my feet

okay i think here finally the introspective voice works soo well. or maybe im just used to the writing style? either way good way to show her horror at finding him attractive lol

that was a LONG sentence, almost the length of a paragraph - but a beautiful one nonetheless

talasyn NOOO!! don’t trust him 😭

OMG!!

she would kill me herself and that made her the most genuine person in the room” 🥹

LOL!!

i like sevraim but i feel his characterisation could be a lot stronger or what makes him different from any of the other characters speaking?? he has interesting traits / (typical jester sidekick archetype) so he would speak more casually to alaric, not just sit more casually around him for example. he could literally be anyone speaking as everyone seems to have a similar voice

“the girl was bewitching him” omg yesss