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dane
is on page 70 of 501
a quick break from hobb but i’m not loving it so far 3 ellipses are used at least three times per page, the characters and their actions are half-realised, and i don’t feel that the world-building has been done all that well…yet i remain hopeful🤷♂️
— Nov 06, 2026 10:05AM
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dane
is on page 120 of 501
chapter ten was the best chapter thus far, but i’m still not convinced by the logic of anyone’s action’s lol
— Nov 06, 2026 03:44PM