M J’s Reviews > Bend Him Break Him > Status Update

A dnfer. We've had limited 3rd person with close perspec. from either characters until now. All of a sudden mid-scene, mid-chapter, mid-book, we're 3rd person omniscient.I was already iffy because of how weak and phony their D/s dynamic is. Like this is meant to be taboo, and that not my issue. It's that Dom is defined as the hypermasc concept of dominant (rough, inconsiderate, top) and sub is the receptive partner

Something that keeps jerking me out the story is the is the characters referring to themselves as "the jock" and "the angry goth". Yikes. The author is using them in place of he/him/his pronouns, which I guess is to avoid confusion? I guess a sentence like he stirred his soup and passed his' to him could be really confusing but every other book in the mm genre makes do