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HOW DID I MISS THIS WAS AN OMEGAVERSE STORY oh god this is gonna be so bad, trad pub omegaverse is always so cringe, keep it in fanfiction guys 😭
— Nov 09, 2026 09:39AM
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I think I'll be dnfing this book bc this shit is pissing me tf off!! The characterization is so ASS bro None of these characters feel real. Olive feels like two different characters Emerson wanted, one is shy and socially anxious and the other wants to get freaky in public. Don't get me wrong, I'm not a prude, but there is absolutely no consistency!! They do not feel like the same person, she just wanted to write sex
— Nov 10, 2026 04:57AM
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p 39, Easton's POV (About Olive the MFC)
"Because what I really wanted to say was 'How about I follow you around at all times and implant a tracker under your skin just in case we ever get separated?' "
YOU DON'T KNOW HER!! THIS IS YOUR FIRST CONVERSATION!! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?! GET AWAY YOU GROSS STALKING CREEP ohhhh my goddddd this book is giving me a serious ick, Olive, get behind me girl and run out of town
— Nov 09, 2026 12:21PM
"Because what I really wanted to say was 'How about I follow you around at all times and implant a tracker under your skin just in case we ever get separated?' "
YOU DON'T KNOW HER!! THIS IS YOUR FIRST CONVERSATION!! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?! GET AWAY YOU GROSS STALKING CREEP ohhhh my goddddd this book is giving me a serious ick, Olive, get behind me girl and run out of town