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Ben Martin
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“She waited with a certain confidence in her aloofness, intent on playing her own game”
I still dislike the narrators endless overly explained psychological explanations. Narrator isn’t curious about anyone because narrator already knows everything? And narrator is annoyingly pessimistic? To the point that the observations become tedious REAL FAST?
I’m into the plot tho, and I like the oddball sister.
— Nov 10, 2026 05:12PM
I still dislike the narrators endless overly explained psychological explanations. Narrator isn’t curious about anyone because narrator already knows everything? And narrator is annoyingly pessimistic? To the point that the observations become tedious REAL FAST?
I’m into the plot tho, and I like the oddball sister.
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Idk about this first chapter…. Not too excited about the narrators “explain all psychological elements” for each character and the “explanations” feel mostly cynical and proud?
— Nov 09, 2026 07:17PM