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Ellen Kate
is 40% done
This is bad. It’s trying to be too many things at once and it has terrible pacing.
How can someone who literally left town for 14 years due to bullying, come back after witnessing a murder, start working for said bully - who by the way, always ‘dreamt’ of being with the FMC - and then in literally 3 days start sleeping with him?! And not only that, it’s ‘making love’. Nope. Nadda. Not for me.
— Nov 11, 2026 12:38AM
How can someone who literally left town for 14 years due to bullying, come back after witnessing a murder, start working for said bully - who by the way, always ‘dreamt’ of being with the FMC - and then in literally 3 days start sleeping with him?! And not only that, it’s ‘making love’. Nope. Nadda. Not for me.
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