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I still really like this book, but it's starting to slow down some. Feels like the scenes aren't really driving a path forward. The 4 viewpoints kinda bog down the story.
— Nov 11, 2026 06:00AM
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Nov 11, 2026 11:02AM
Agree, I think losing at least one view point at least, but probably two (def Helen, probably Amy-Rose) would have really tightened it up and kept it at a better clip.
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