Tyesha’s Reviews > Where They Last Saw Her > Status Update

I almost gave her credit for thinking smart during an emergency but she did put herself in that position in the first place and then went back for seconds after she saved her friend and escaped unnoticed. Why are we going back? You were in the clear. She better kill someone or I’m freaking out.

The consequences of being foolish have arrived. If you’re going to be staking out traffickers you need to at least pretend to be sneaky or they will get you… obviously.

I was right. They kidnap baited the 2 year old. Suddenly she’s now calling him “my ____” instead of the weird depersonalized way she was talking about him.

The two year old being dragged around all of this is unnecessary. I’m not liking the way they talk about the kids at all. It’s never “my _____” it’s always “the _____”. It feels weirdly impersonal but also so far the kids are not major parts of the story. Why are we including them just to ignore them. I don’t know. Maybe they’ll be used as pawns by someone other than the author.