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Luna Magee
is 17% done
This book is trying too hard. The humor doesn't always work with the characterizations. I wish there were rules about what characters know about the "alternates" and how they know it if it's a new setting to them. How and why does Kai know what a zeppelin is and how it works if they don't exist in his own reality?
— Jul 02, 2017 06:15PM
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Luna Magee
is 42% done
'"Don't be ridiculous," Irene said briskly. "We may collect fiction, but we are not required to imitate the stupider parts of it."'
— Jul 04, 2017 08:00AM
Luna Magee
is 29% done
Descriptions of action sequences are clear and precise.
— Jul 03, 2017 07:50AM
Luna Magee
is starting
The dialogue is sometimes confusing and doesn't always seem genuine or natural.
— Jul 02, 2017 04:57PM
