Ben Lilley’s Reviews > Moro's Price > Status Update
Ben Lilley
is 48% done
Marriage in the middle of a book? And what happened to Val's friend?
— Jul 04, 2017 09:47PM
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Ben Lilley
is 53% done
Pages and pages of backstory. I'm only reading this because I have to for a review.
— Jul 07, 2017 09:36PM
Ben Lilley
is 49% done
This story has lost my interest. The vividness of the first chapters is gone. The mystery is no longer interesting. What happened to that one dude?
— Jul 07, 2017 09:17PM
Ben Lilley
is 16% done
There are jarring flashbacks; too much time is taken with scene building.
— Jul 03, 2017 10:19PM
