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OMG! Apparently whoever proofread this only did the first 20% or so because the farther it goes the more errors there are. SMH....
— Jul 09, 2017 11:06AM
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Pati
is 22% done
Ummmm.... why in the hell are we being told "Chad's wife" instead of being told her name?! They're in her house so tell us her name! *sigh* Ridiculous. Absolutely ridiculous. I wish my beloved genre would get some decent editors. *sigh*
— Jul 09, 2017 10:52AM
Pati
is 22% done
Contradictions are used in thoughts too!! My thoughts never sound so stilted. SMH....
— Jul 09, 2017 10:45AM
Pati
is 17% done
Ugh! All of the damned stilted speech is driving me bonkers!!! Damn it use contradictions in their speech!! I've, you're, you'll!!!!
— Jul 09, 2017 10:14AM
