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Chelsea
Chelsea is 17% done
This one feels different, wrong kind of. Her other books switch perspectives ever 1-2 chapters, but this one doesn't. Out of the first 16 chapters, only THREE were written from Shelly's perspective. Maybe she was rushed, but it didn't feel like Penny developed her character enough or something. It's disappointing because I had such high hopes for this book.
Aug 09, 2017 07:00PM
Beard in Mind (Winston Brothers, #4)

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Chelsea is 43% done
I have problems with this. I am almost 50% through and there are only 3 chapters in Shelly's perspective. All 3 were meetings with her therapist. Nothing about life, nothing about Beau.

Weak writing.

You can tell Reid was phoning in her character because she wanted someone with a disorder. Coming from somebody with Obsessive Compulsive tendencies and issues, Shelly doesn't feel researched or true to the disorder.
Aug 10, 2017 06:12AM
Beard in Mind (Winston Brothers, #4)


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