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*sigh* "the weather had starting to turn"..... SMH.... duh! Come on Dreamspinner hire some decent proofreaders! SMH...
— Aug 09, 2017 08:57PM
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Pati
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I must say that I'm very disappointed in all of the "after the fact" telling rather than letting us come along and see their diving and shopping excursions. I know that Mr Grey and his husband are divers and was really looking forward to experiencing it with the characters.
— Aug 10, 2017 08:07AM
Pati
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"Philippe has been down to check out the room, and so far there are no issues with seals or oil leakage".... WTH?! William is there to check the engine. SMH.... once again where is the editor?
— Aug 10, 2017 07:27AM
Pati
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WTF?! That's the complete opposite of what he told his parents!! SMH....
— Aug 10, 2017 07:13AM
Pati
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Ummm.... hello!?!? We've already read this exact conversation earlier! Apparently the editor fell asleep on the job. SMH
— Aug 10, 2017 07:09AM
Pati
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SMH... gas stations need electricity for their pumps to work folks.
— Aug 10, 2017 04:54AM
Pati
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The night before his mom says dinner could be their last hot meal for a while and Mike reminds her that he has a grill. Yet the next morning imply that the stove is gas therefore no problem cooking without electricity. SMH.... Oops!
— Aug 10, 2017 04:49AM
Pati
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Ugh. The weather channel is not the channel to watch when you're awaiting a hurricane. The local meteorologists are the ones to watch. Our local guy knew that Charlie was going to hit us even as TWC and NOAH were still saying Tampa.
— Aug 09, 2017 09:31PM
Pati
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LMAO!!! Trust me the first day after a major hurricane hit we all ate very well! Everyone in the area fire up their grills and as food thawed cooked it up and ate feasts!
— Aug 09, 2017 09:24PM
Pati
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SMH.... "William continued packing back and forth"..... really?! He's pacing! NOT packing!!
— Aug 09, 2017 09:05PM

