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Keith
is 26% done
I'm a little over a quarter of the way through the book and it has got to get betterl soon or this is going in the DNF pile.
I've spent countless hours wandering around the woods over many decades so when a character is climbing a rocky, vine covered, trail and has to stop several times to remove leeches from her legs it it just rips me out of the flow of the story. Leeches live in water not on rocky trails.
— Aug 15, 2017 11:49AM
I've spent countless hours wandering around the woods over many decades so when a character is climbing a rocky, vine covered, trail and has to stop several times to remove leeches from her legs it it just rips me out of the flow of the story. Leeches live in water not on rocky trails.
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