Darlene Barrett’s Reviews > Prehistoric > Status Update
Darlene Barrett
is 75% done
Cannot finish. In addition to continual misuse of simple words. It appears some parts of the mss were randomly removed and inserted elsewhere. People in a vehicle suddenly at home, etc. Sloppy writing, loose plot, wanders off on tangents. Do not recommend.
— Aug 19, 2017 09:07PM
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Darlene Barrett
is 75% done
"Baited breath". Good grief. Full of misused words.
— Aug 19, 2017 09:04PM
Darlene Barrett
is 33% done
Interesting oversight in that the guest investors did not have an overnight plan for food, rest, shelter.
— Aug 17, 2017 12:32PM
