Khaalidah Muhammad-Ali’s Reviews > Chained > Status Update
Khaalidah Muhammad-Ali
is 50% done
The characters are fairly well drawn and not paper cut out puppets there specifically to perform the deed. It's nice to see a fantasy type story with a multiracial cast, however I do find it disappointing that the story is set in a make believe European type environment that doesn't match the multiracial cast. I would have liked to see more varying cultures and not just skin colors.
— Aug 30, 2017 11:47AM
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Khaalidah Muhammad-Ali
is 85% done
Still pleased with the story. Intrigue and mystery. Power struggles. Nice.
I appreciate that these characters are developing feelings for one another in an organic honest way. No instalove here. And no damsels in distress.
Still bothered by the fact that this is taking place in a European type world.
— Aug 30, 2017 04:09PM
I appreciate that these characters are developing feelings for one another in an organic honest way. No instalove here. And no damsels in distress.
Still bothered by the fact that this is taking place in a European type world.
