David’s Reviews > Airel > Status Update

I can't say I like the story. I do feel engrossed after reading for some time, though. It is still difficult to read very much at a time. There are a lot of poorly done metaphors, too. A lot of "you're not ready for this but you won't listen to me so here's what you do". Yeah, okay.

The writing is just atrocious and the story doesn't move logically...among other issues.