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is 82% done
Bit disjointed... probably because it was published as an online serial first... no chapter numbers... some verbal narration early on "Let's leave Marla and her friends for now..."
Also seems to have led to a contradiction, missed in the proofreading:
Page 222: "I haven't told Rondeau about it."
Page 183: *Marla told Rondeau about it.*
— Sep 21, 2017 02:21AM
Also seems to have led to a contradiction, missed in the proofreading:
Page 222: "I haven't told Rondeau about it."
Page 183: *Marla told Rondeau about it.*
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"It's wonderful news... A number of your enemies are conspiring to kill you... Isn't it wonderful?... You'll be dead soon, my darling!" -- The Walking Death
Unlike my usual opinion on excessive reminders of the plots of previous books, it's been helpful this time since it's been so long... only complaint is the repetition between chapters about being stuck in Maui...
— Sep 20, 2017 02:58AM
Unlike my usual opinion on excessive reminders of the plots of previous books, it's been helpful this time since it's been so long... only complaint is the repetition between chapters about being stuck in Maui...
