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Is it a bad sign if I am rooting for the villain and think he's much hotter than the actual hero of the book?

Is it a bad sign if I am rooting for the villain and think he's much hotter than the actual hero of the book?

It says a lot about the quality of the writing - or rather, lack thereof - if I find myself drifting off to other thoughts while reading a steamy scene... Well, not to be mean, but if I ever need a push to think about my own stories, I'll read one JS's books - what with how often I caught myself drifting off and musing about something else...

Argh, I'm struggling to finish this book. It suffers from a serious case of overdescription.

I take it back about the sentence structure - it is as bad as in the previous book. I'm finding myself waiting for the next "as" in the sentence, which makes it hard to concentrate on the plot. Also, the description is on the heavy side of adjectives and adverbs again. It can be straining to read all that info pressed into one sentence.

I take it back about the sentence structure - it is as bad as in the previous book. I'm finding myself waiting for the next "as" in the sentence, which makes it hard to concentrate on the plot. Also, the description is on the heavy side of adjectives and adverbs again. It can be straining to read all that info pressed into one sentence.

Phew, so far, there are less roaming body parts in this one. The sentence structure is still a bit repetitive (A does something AS something else occurs), but not as frequent here. Maybe it'll get better. Hope dies last.