Lisa Aiello’s Reviews > The Rebirth of Sin > Status Update
Lisa Aiello
is 24% done
Dear Author - the words you are looking for are:
penchant, not pension - you have penchant for something - a pension is something you collect when you retire
platonic, not plutonic - I don't even know what plutonic is, but it sounds out of this world!!!
naught, not not - it's all for naught, if you keep using the wrong words
I think I'm just bitchy cuz you are making me hate Noah.
— Oct 13, 2017 06:24AM
penchant, not pension - you have penchant for something - a pension is something you collect when you retire
platonic, not plutonic - I don't even know what plutonic is, but it sounds out of this world!!!
naught, not not - it's all for naught, if you keep using the wrong words
I think I'm just bitchy cuz you are making me hate Noah.
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Lisa Aiello
is 21% done
So, I sadly must say that I don't think there is ANY hope for Noah...and I'm not sure I even want there to be anymore. I am joining in the "I hate Noah" club right now!!
— Oct 13, 2017 05:58AM
Lisa Aiello
is 10% done
This desperately needs editing. A plutonic relationsip? Is this a book about space? And Noah is about 150 shades of fucked up. He has some serious issues. I was rooting for him....and now I am just rooting for him to get hit by a truck!! And Keaton needs to exhibit some self respect. End of rant.
— Oct 12, 2017 06:37PM
