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Las
is 25% done
Ugh, please tell me this evil ex girlfriend isn't going to play a major part in this story.
— Jun 13, 2012 07:34AM
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Las
is 80% done
The descriptions of the paintings sound cheesy as hell. And I would be pissed if I were in Cath's shoes right now...he just put her life out there for the world's entertainment.
— Jun 14, 2012 04:40PM
Las
is 55% done
Ah, okay, so there are actually legitimate reason for Cath to be all gun-shy about Nev. That would have been nice to know sooner, because up until now I've been muttering to myself about how contemporaries never have any real conflict. This book could have done with a prologue.
— Jun 14, 2012 09:55AM
Las
is 25% done
I like the characters and the premise, but so far the story just feels off to me. I just don't see what Cath's problem is. Nev is nothing like the guys she was with when she was "Bad Cath" (how many goddam times do we have to hear about Bad Cath/New Cath?), so why is she freaking out?
— Jun 12, 2012 05:37PM
