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Spending too much time on a back and forth than revealing more plot.

So it turns out the person that owns the 'kimono' is Korean.. but y'know all Asian cultures are the same.. it's just like how we lump all European cultures together right?

And now there's a forced marriage/rape plot going on because we had to have that in here. WTF is Apex doing?

More stuff happens, still haven't gotten to a plot quite yet.
Also I think the way this 'kimono' is described it's actually a cheongsam.

They author actually put the "HIC"s in the writing for when Annie got hiccups. Please don't do this.

Also more comments about looks.

So what happened to Cayce? What is even going on? I want to say that this book jumps around more than mine does but I at least tried to make mine, make sense and not fill it with babble about sand vampires and Sekou.

So the plot doesn't seem so bad, however just the way the book is written is...

So Kerpera is "kiafrican" which is this authors word for black. So it's got some diversity on it... BUT a lot of the time the girls are focused on how they look to guys. It's mentioned that it's part of Mars culture but...

Oh yeah and there's this Facer guy that called his sisters "little bitches" soo... there's...that

This book has way too much jargon. "Mears" replaces "years" as it's on Mars. "Rat-Hab" is some kind of insult. Oh boy the names. However I name my characters weird but Nanoannie....

Oh and we have some "Kiafricans" who are prejudiced against white people. =_ = there better be more of a plot there because you are raising a red flag.