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Ben Lilley
is 67% done
It got better. We've had a long period of little to know time jumping.
— Oct 23, 2017 09:31PM
Ben Lilley
is 45% done
The mix of past and present isn't working for me because I'm not actually sure when we are supposed to be.
— Oct 22, 2017 08:11PM
Ben Lilley
is 25% done
Okay. Now we're repeating past scenes in another POV. :(
— Oct 21, 2017 09:16PM
Ben Lilley
is 14% done
The story is stalling because we keep moving back and forward in time but not forward in the story.
— Oct 21, 2017 08:49PM
Ben Lilley
is 11% done
I'm not digging this jumping back and forth in time storytelling choice.
— Oct 21, 2017 12:06AM
