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JenMcJ
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"Thane scrubbed a hand down his face. This was like some weird Lifetime TV movie. What the hell just happened?"
Thank you Thane....that's exactly what I'm thinking..and you know, if your character is thinking this....so is your reader. WTH with the instant 20 minute family therapy discussion that solves all of Thane's abandonment and emotional issues? No. Just no.
— Nov 01, 2017 08:55AM
Thank you Thane....that's exactly what I'm thinking..and you know, if your character is thinking this....so is your reader. WTH with the instant 20 minute family therapy discussion that solves all of Thane's abandonment and emotional issues? No. Just no.
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JenMcJ
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How many dark curtains that you can hide behind and have enough room to have sex behind are there in the "absolutely no sex in the sex club", sex club?
— Nov 01, 2017 08:27AM
JenMcJ
is on page 100 of 420
59% This sucks. I'm having so much trouble with getting through this book.
If Thane thinks, says or otherwise ruminates one more time about Levi's mother I'm going to scream. No Linda is not his mother. His mother died. Remember? He told you that when you first met and you said you wished your dad was dead.
Also, this is obsession, not love, not even lust. Run, Levi, run.
— Nov 01, 2017 06:34AM
If Thane thinks, says or otherwise ruminates one more time about Levi's mother I'm going to scream. No Linda is not his mother. His mother died. Remember? He told you that when you first met and you said you wished your dad was dead.
Also, this is obsession, not love, not even lust. Run, Levi, run.
