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Ruth
Ruth is 44% done
"Abandoning all decorum, she moved against him as he stroked that pulsing jewel, her channel running slick with honey" Give me strength. Please. Or a large gin. Very large.
Jun 21, 2012 08:36PM
By Royal Command

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Ruth
Ruth is 33% done
"Searing blade of male arousal"?!!! Ouch! Sounds painful! Not the sort of thing I'd want waving around in front (or behind) of me...
Jun 18, 2012 08:06PM
By Royal Command


Ruth
Ruth is 22% done
"His hand paused, a scant inch above her sheltered crevasse".. Her WHAT? The poor heroine has a frikkin' crevasse!? That sounds pretty painful and not something you really want to get within an inch, in case you fall in, never to be seen again!!! Someone please warn this guy. Urgently.
Jun 16, 2012 04:19PM
By Royal Command


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message 1: by Vivian (new)

Vivian Again, luckily I finished my tea before this update.


Ruth Vivian wrote: "Again, luckily I finished my tea before this update."

Phew!! I nearly spewed my beer whilst reading the original...


message 3: by Suzie (new)

Suzie Quint As bad as that is to read, aren't you glad it's not an audiobook?


message 4: by Vivian (new)

Vivian Suzie wrote: "As bad as that is to read, aren't you glad it's not an audiobook?"

snort.


message 5: by Ruth (last edited Jun 22, 2012 08:59AM) (new) - rated it 3 stars

Ruth Vivian wrote: "Suzie wrote: "As bad as that is to read, aren't you glad it's not an audiobook?"

snort."


I have to say its criminal. This book has some really great things going for it, but the writing during the love scenes just completely lets it down. It's very frustrating to read, and I wish the editor had gotten a thick red pen out and seriously edited the awful 1980s style purple nonsense.

Grrrr.


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