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Beate
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The London Tube does NOT roar onto the platform. You can perfectly fine continue talking while the Tube is coming and going. Also, people in London know how to behave, not even tourists push their way onto the trains while people are disembarking. They wait politely until their turn to embark. Seriously. Do some research. This book was going well at first so I bought 2nd and 3rd book, regretting it now.
— Nov 23, 2017 09:37AM
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Beate
is 84% done
"Put the fear of God into her" does not mean what you think it means, dear author. It does not mean being afraid FOR her boyfriend, that would mean being afraid OF her boyfriend. This was a major hit AND MISS!
— Nov 24, 2017 07:25AM
Beate
is 9% done
*sigh* This author really does not know London at all, OR British people...
— Nov 23, 2017 09:49AM
Beate
is 7% done
This book is set in London. I don't think the author has ever visited London - the Black Cabs don't have a trunk, and the ride from Heathrow to Central London in one of those is batshit crazy expensive. Write what you know and know what you write, seems to be a good idea. Also, research is your friend! Don't just assume! Details do matter, especially if your readers have "been there, done that" you know?
— Nov 23, 2017 09:33AM

