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Sarah
Sarah is 35% done
I actually have no idea what this book is about. I thought I'd know by now, but I'm just wading through more and more character descriptions. There is, at least, one dead body now though, so that's good.
Nov 23, 2017 04:37PM
Operation Hail Storm (Hail, #1)

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Sarah
Sarah is 85% done
I found out what was happening shortly after the last update, but the writing hasn't improved. It's vaguely sexist (I guess that's the Ian Fleming comparison), but mostly just pedestrian. Too much telling, not enough showing, and way too much repetition.
Nov 28, 2017 12:15PM
Operation Hail Storm (Hail, #1)


Sarah
Sarah is 20% done
Oh god ... I don't even know if I'll finish reading it. It's rivalling 'American Psycho' for detailed description, but not in a good way.
Nov 22, 2017 05:06PM
Operation Hail Storm (Hail, #1)


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