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I can't finish this book because I can't abide some of the endless chapters. The writer needs to learn how and when to add chapter breaks. Some chapters are shot you and just right whilst the next will just go on and on. There are many lodigical places where the text could be split into shorter chapters. Sometimes I just want to read little and go to bed. Checkout the last few novels Robert B Parker as examples.