Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer’s Reviews > Journey from Skioria > Status Update
Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer
is 83% done
Autonomy gets hurt in a landslide and they linger 3 weeks so his leg can heal... this is better but it’s still just a hike... they get to the human areas and find a summer hut with a garden (MORE FOOD) and then take a tumble in the river. Tania is scared.
— Dec 05, 2017 01:06AM
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Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer
is 99% done
They finished the hike and the shop owner Carson called her parents and now they vacation together in the lake hut they found (which belongs to Carson’s!)
— Dec 05, 2017 10:21AM
Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer
is 60% done
I really like the characters in this but it’s basically a hike with a birth Secret so far. Just as I hit 60% they are now worried about a patch of brown in the water... it’s WAY TOO LATE for story to finally start up. While I don’t dislike Christian stories I don’t like the propensity for writers to sap the story of any conflict. It leaves lies by parents as the only bit of angst...
— Dec 03, 2017 10:20PM
Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer
is 7% done
Poor girl! She meets Trilicius who takes her home with him to his mate Holly! He’s a little man who she thinks is just a little older than her but is 35, lol! He tells her she’s in Skioria in a forest by a river, she reveals she was in a boating accident on the ocean!
— Dec 02, 2017 02:07AM
