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Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer
Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer is 99% done
They finished the hike and the shop owner Carson called her parents and now they vacation together in the lake hut they found (which belongs to Carson’s!)
Dec 05, 2017 10:21AM
Journey from Skioria

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Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer
Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer is 83% done
Autonomy gets hurt in a landslide and they linger 3 weeks so his leg can heal... this is better but it’s still just a hike... they get to the human areas and find a summer hut with a garden (MORE FOOD) and then take a tumble in the river. Tania is scared.
Dec 05, 2017 01:06AM
Journey from Skioria


Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer
Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer is 60% done
I really like the characters in this but it’s basically a hike with a birth Secret so far. Just as I hit 60% they are now worried about a patch of brown in the water... it’s WAY TOO LATE for story to finally start up. While I don’t dislike Christian stories I don’t like the propensity for writers to sap the story of any conflict. It leaves lies by parents as the only bit of angst...
Dec 03, 2017 10:20PM
Journey from Skioria


Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer
Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer is 7% done
Poor girl! She meets Trilicius who takes her home with him to his mate Holly! He’s a little man who she thinks is just a little older than her but is 35, lol! He tells her she’s in Skioria in a forest by a river, she reveals she was in a boating accident on the ocean!
Dec 02, 2017 02:07AM
Journey from Skioria


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