mah1’s Reviews > Forever With You > Status Update
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I'm now trying the method of taking notes as I, maybe then I'll be able to write a more coherent review. At the moment I feel like the author is living inside their head a bit. The writing could be crisper and their actions and reaction might feel less odd if their feelings were more clear. Now the story feels choppy and the MCs both act irrationally.
— Jan 06, 2018 03:24AM
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Oh no. I'm watching Poirot while reading and both Kelly and Hatings are goodlording. Hope I won't be seeing Kelly as Hastings for the rest of the book. Other than that, a very promising start.
— Jan 06, 2018 01:33AM
