Trix’s Reviews > Please Come Home for Christmas > Status Update
Trix
is 64% done
One paragraph ends with the pair tucking the children in bed, next sentence starts with them going wild at it. What a woozy!
— Jan 08, 2018 06:31AM
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Trix
is 54% done
So, dialogue has been completely forgotten, replaced by a grammatically incorrect story telling.
— Jan 08, 2018 05:12AM
Trix
is 33% done
A bit too much telling and not enough actual interaction and dialogue.
— Jan 07, 2018 01:27PM
