Laura’s Reviews > The Young Ancients: Books I-VI > Status Update

All in all, great story so far. My biggest problem is a lack of proofreading. There are soooooooo many mistakes of your and you're, they're their and there, to and too... Not to mention poor use of commas, extra/missing words, words that should end in ed ending in es or er, etc., and just over all poor phrasing in places. It makes it very difficult to stay engaged with the story.