Amelia’s Reviews > Attrition: the First Act of Penance > Status Update

Sadly this will be my first DNF of 2018. Not only that but this is going straight to the Goodwill this weekend.

The dialogue between Lexi and Racath is brutal. It doesn’t sound like a real conversation. It feels forced and disjointed. Not liking this so far.

There are quite a few grammatical errors and missing words. It's annoying and makes the book less professional BUT I'll keep reading it. Maybe it's just my copy and the later prints have fixed it *shrugs*

I have not had time to really get into this a read but so far it's starting to pick up.

This is a really dense book. The writing style is taking some getting used to. It's a little TOO descriptive for my taste but we will see where it goes from here.