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Erica
Erica is reading
I'm hanging in there because the plot is sort of interesting and occasionally I like the characters, but DEAR. GOD. Some of the scenes are written so clumsily it feels like a 14-yr-old's first fanfic (and no, the irony is not lost on me there). No teenager speaks the way these guys do either. Not even the pretentious, well-read ones.
Feb 03, 2018 08:39PM
City of Bones (The Mortal Instruments, #1)

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Erica
Erica is starting
Malec fanfiction has more of my attention at the moment than the canon story. Make of that what you will.
Feb 05, 2018 07:13AM
City of Bones (The Mortal Instruments, #1)


Erica
Erica is starting
If I roll my eyes any harder at Clary's brain-dead dialogue they may just tumble right out of my skull in a desperate bid for freedom...
Feb 03, 2018 08:43PM
City of Bones (The Mortal Instruments, #1)


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