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Reading this on my iPad. Unfortunately, I don't have much good to say about it so far. Needs a good editor. Dialogue is stilted. The characters rarely use contractions when speaking. Lots of grammar errors. (Was this self-published?) As for the storyline: I just finished watching "Heros" on Netflix, and this book seems to be a direct rip-off of that. I'll continue to sludge through and hope it gets better.
Jul 23, 2012 09:40AM
Into the Shadows (Into the Shadows, #1)

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