W.B. Jacobs’s Reviews > Sleeping Beauties > Status Update

The intensity of the novel is definitely picking up, along with the suspense, however gore is being relied on a little too heavily when it comes to the battle of the prison, and Evie's actions are requiring more and more suspension of disbelief.

The sections in the women's world are gaining more intensity, thus becoming more interesting, though I thought that the scene with Tiffany's birth dragged on a little two long, and there are a few too many descriptions of things that have little plot importance.

Again, the descriptions of the world the women are in tend to be boring and stretch on far too long, and feel kind of unnecessary, though they may turn out to be necessary for the climax, I just don't know. What I do find interesting currently, however, is the unfolding of Clint's plan to protect Evie and the other happenings in the real, male dominated, world.

The section I just read included a description of the world the women were stuck in, and while it was interesting, it went on for too long and grew somewhat dull.