Mara’s Reviews > Seraphina > Status Update
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is 45% done
Yes, the heroine is 17. But the Palace Guard Captain isn't. But his character has the same attitude of a young teenager, maybe curiosity is acceptable, but stupidity shouldn't. Perception is different from the 'I want to know everything' of a toddler, and I can't really accept that a Captain investigating his uncle's death (a royal prince btw) involves a 17 yo musician. On what basis? She had a dragon teacher?
— Feb 10, 2018 10:34AM
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