Xochilt’s Reviews > Riot Act > Status Update
Xochilt
is 27% done
There is a bit of a pick up to the story, starting with the introduction of Sean, her ex. However, we have only seen him once :( I need more. He sounds like a good time!
— Feb 17, 2018 03:09AM
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Xochilt
is 12% done
Soooooo slow. I loved the first one but slightly puzzled as to why. I remember loving the heroine: equal parts tough-as-nail and vulnerable. I think it's the world building? There's only so much you can do in contemporary lit. and I don't need paragraphs to describe an auto body shop turned gym. But onwards. . .
— Feb 10, 2018 02:04AM
