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Meep
Meep is 65% done
The writing is poor. The police idiots. The case for a locked room mystery is no where near as 'beguiling' as claimed.
Mar 02, 2018 09:50AM
Untouchable (Blake Harte Mysteries, #1)

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Meep
Meep is 23% done
This is so awkwardly written. Had to re-read a few sentences to make sense.

And these people are incredibly stupid!

4 police, a farmer, and two others - hear a shot, asserting man and gun in shed - are 'amazed' at body falling over threshold. Not one mentions danger of armed man, not one is concerned over his well being - nope they're all 'amazed' ....I wasn't.
Sep 10, 2022 09:24PM
Untouchable (Blake Harte Mysteries, #1)


Meep
Meep is 31% done
'Was he definitely dead?' asked the police officer - at least half hour after they left the body to go watch cctv.
Mar 01, 2018 11:43AM
Untouchable (Blake Harte Mysteries, #1)


Meep
Meep is 4% done
Writing feels clunky so far, not an encouraging start.
Feb 26, 2018 08:12AM
Untouchable (Blake Harte Mysteries, #1)


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