Emily’s Reviews > The Casquette Girls > Status Update
Emily
is 35% done
i'm holding off to see how everything fits into the larger plot, but honestly as it stands it just feels like there are too many characters crammed in here. i can't get a solid picture of any of them past their first impression.
— Mar 19, 2018 11:18AM
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Emily
is 61% done
the story hit part 2 and then E X P L O D E D
okay i'm hooked now. you've got me. i'm fully on board, yes.
— Mar 20, 2018 09:44AM
okay i'm hooked now. you've got me. i'm fully on board, yes.
Emily
is 20% done
desiree borges is a one-dimensional stereotype and if she doesn't get more fleshed out i'm going to scream it is the year two thousand and eighteen and we don't have to live with generic fanfic characterization cliches anymore
— Mar 19, 2018 10:22AM
Emily
is 8% done
you are WRITING OFF a DESIGNER DRESS because it GOT SOME BLOOD ON IT
ARE YOU KIDDING ME
TAKE THAT SHIT TO THE CLEANERS AND SALVAGE IT
DON'T POUR MONEY DOWN THE DRAIN WHAT THE HELL
— Mar 19, 2018 09:35AM
ARE YOU KIDDING ME
TAKE THAT SHIT TO THE CLEANERS AND SALVAGE IT
DON'T POUR MONEY DOWN THE DRAIN WHAT THE HELL
Emily
is 6% done
please no. please don't set up female characters to be catty to each other. i'm so tired.
— Mar 19, 2018 09:29AM
Emily
is 6% done
oh OF COURSE she just casually throws on a chanel dress bc OF COURSE she's been burdened with designer clothes against her will and it JUST HAPPENS to be the plainest thing she owns right now. i'm. okay.
— Mar 13, 2018 08:46AM
Emily
is 3% done
okay okay okay okay okay that was nice and atmospheric i am here for this yes
— Mar 12, 2018 11:03AM
Emily
is starting
first of all, who on earth texts like that? when does this take place? these are not teenagers these texts read like my 50-year-old mom messaging me istg
— Mar 12, 2018 10:55AM
