Jenn (not Lily)’s Reviews > No Small Parts > Status Update
Jenn (not Lily)
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Nevermind -- that's his Dad's name! Too late at night to make coherent updates, obviously!
— Apr 01, 2018 01:23AM
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Jenn (not Lily)
is 86% done
Nat's uncle, Jerome Horn...wait a minute, I thought that was his Mom's brother...second big editing error?
— Apr 01, 2018 01:21AM
Jenn (not Lily)
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sorry -- I meant teeth -- the problems with phone keyboards!
— Mar 31, 2018 03:38PM
Jenn (not Lily)
is 43% done
sorry -- I meant teeth -- the problems with phone keyboards!
— Mar 31, 2018 03:38PM
Jenn (not Lily)
is 43% done
Continuity error -- if Nat is still in werewolf makeup and prosthetic teetch, how could he kiss someone "hard and rough and demanding," hmm?! And then he mentions that he has to be in the makeup chair in 15 minutes. Bad editorial spot!
— Mar 31, 2018 03:37PM
