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Kelly L
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As much as I am enjoying Alex & Ben’s story, it is stop-n-start reading. I keep getting knocked out of the story. Atrocious editing & pronouns are rare. But it’s the use of British terminology ruins the flow and takes me abruptly out of the story. Good story with a lot of heart so I keep reading.
— Apr 04, 2018 06:30PM
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